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Post by floracarrow on Jun 14, 2011 17:04:20 GMT -5
Player's Name: Mack or Goose Other Characters: (Do you have other characters already here? If so, who?) Contacts: Aim: smhecw77, and Pm me for my others Random Fact: I got my nickname from the fact I can honk like a goose!
Name: Flora Sophia Carrow Alias: Crazy Carrow Age: 16 Birthday: Febuaray 15th Gender: Female Blood: Pure Sexual Preference: ugh, currently knocked up… But Hetro Wand: Apple, Dragonheartstring, Rather stiff. Pet: Kneezle Special Ability: none Year: 6th House: slytherin
Best Subject: Potions Worst Subject: transfiguration Quidditch: Nope. Bum leg Patronus: No Hair: Brown, not really cut, Long Eyes: Bahlue (yes flora said for me to spell it that way. Blue) Height: 5’6 Weight: 195
Flora is totally different from her sister. Sure, they look alike, but personality wise they are two different people. Flora is very loud and vocal, her sister is quiet. Flora likes it that way all though, she can’t ever be herself at home, it’s always Properness this, and pureblood line that.. at school, she doesn’t have to worry about that, she can be her loud self, and hitch up her uniform and go flying at 3 am if she wishes… not that she’s allowed to.
Saddly, Flora’s trapped into a Loveless relationship, Her aunt picked out the man she was to marry,and poor flora is head over heels in love with another guy. She wants nothing to do with this guy her aunt picked out and isn’t shy about trying to make her self out to be a real party girl in hopes he will fall for someone else. Like it’ll work tho, Flora’s in a tight spot as it is. A rather Nasty pregancy scare and rumors flying around have truly almost broken flora's spirits and allowed her to be pushed around a little more then she normally would. She often confinds in her diary stuff she wouldn't dare tell her own family, Stuff like her not wanting to marry a pureblood, and that she'd rather marry a gryfindor then who her aunt picked out for her, that she'd rather be out with her freinds right now looping it up in the hogshead with a round of butterbeers then stuck in the castle all day. thankfully, peeves was around to make her laugh,which he did by singing a silly song about Prof. Snape, or singing about potter. Soon she forgot all about her sadness and started to smile again. Flora couldn't believe that she could smile through all the pain she was going through. She couldn’t believe that her own family would dump her off on the school and make them her new home away from home, add to that the fact her sister is no longer talking to her, and she’s been forced to stay home for holidays, and forced to find solace in books, Things couldn’t get any worse for her. So she thought, when she learnt that she was being singled out for some reason, and that she’d be staying in a separate dorm, away from the friends she counted on. She so badly wanted to just disappear.
Flora was born into a well off family, the carrows. The only child of Alexis and Percival Carrow. The two Reluctantly Signed over care to her Sister and her brother and rarely, if at all, speak to the girl. Flora believes her mom and dad died in a fire and she survived. For so many years she believed they were gone, until one day she met them! Alexis ran up to the her and threw her arms around flora, saying how much she’d grown, and they were sorry for letting her go, and she should always listen to aunty and uncle.. then she walked off.. out of her life again.
Flora became imbittered towards her Aunt for lying to her, and refused to follow her Aunts path. Upon her 11th birthday, Flora was sorted into Slytherin. She took classes with her New freinds, and began to repair a rather shattered friendship with her aunt and uncle. The family was finally getting back to normal when flora came bursting into the room in tears. She was screaming she hated guys and that if anyone named thomas called, that she never wanted to speak to him again and stormed back upstairs. Flora was in tears at that point, she was really upset, upset to the point of tears.
Any one could tell flora was upset, and asked what was going on, it wasn't like her to totally break into tears. Flora said that she was pregant. 16, pregant and she thinks the father may be a halfblood and he wasn't exactly the standup guy she needed for a family life and then flora snapped and yelled "SO WHAT THAT I SCREWED A HALFBLOOD? IT'S MY FRICKEN BODY AND LIFE OK?!" her aunt heard that and just asked flora to please leave,she'd soiled the Carrow name, and that she'd no longer be considered her niece.
Flora,however, rather enjoys the freedom this gives her, being out on her own now. She Enjoys that slight messure of freedom,and despite her house, enjoys hanging out with Muggleborns and Half bloods and just being as far away from that lifestyle as she can be. Not to say she doesn't have access to money, her aunt made sure she had access to her parents Vault and that she could keep a house elf and stuff for her new house.
I have read and agreed to the rules of this site. I hereby recognize that my disobedience of these terms will result in punishment at the sole discretion of the admins.
Signed Goose
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Post by JULES! NEW DREAMING on Jun 14, 2011 17:32:23 GMT -5
Hey there! Before we can accept you, there are a few things in the bio that need fixing. - App pic size. 350 x 200 is the requirement. If you need it resized, ask in the cbox. Someone will help you!
- History length. We require 4 good paragraphs. What you've written could constitute as two if split. Give more detail. Tell us more about her!
- Please watch out for spelling. "Tho" is not "Although". "Thro" is not "Through." We understand that shorthand is easy, but we don't allow it in the rp (although, you can use it in the cbox.) Also, there are a few cases of weird capitalization. Be careful with that!
Please, fix these errors, and we will give your bio another read. Thanks for considering TBD! ~ TBD ADMINS
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Post by OH SO FLY! on Jun 15, 2011 13:11:41 GMT -5
denied We are sorry, but your application has been denied. - Flora Carrow is a canon from the 1990s. We are sorry for not catching this earlier, but you made her sound like a character you had created, therefore we had no way of knowing until we happened to look up the name.
- There are many spelling/typing errors in your application.
- The character is very flat, very one-dimensional.
- The history is choppy and poorly written. It does not make much sense.
We strongly suggest that you join a beginners site, and work your way up from there. Thanks for considering TBD! ~ TBD ADMINS
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